reading

tuck everlasting = what kind of character was donald zinkoff ? :loser :( = = he wears a giraffe hat to school and a bully steps on it and he puts it on the ground for him to step on it again . = = he is not picked during games, events = = he also has a friend that makes earwax candles. =

Andy: A few things....I think you have a good start, but it is very hard to read. Please take the blue off so I can read it. Remember...I am old and my eyes are going. Second, This should be written like a paragraph. First sentence answering the question and then the rest of the sentences explaining, or proving, your topic sentence. Please revise during reading Friday. Thanks! ~Mrs. Novak